Monday, 7 January 2013

Sabrina Vizor: overall the blog is well layed out and out and is very clear however small adjustments to make certain things stand out might be needed. for example making some pictures bigger and perhaps showing how your came to end front cover like photo shoots. I like the prezi's and you have good description of why you have done things. To improve i would just add as much as you can and all your past work to show your progress.
Strengths of front cover: Good colour scheme and impressive makeup. You obviously have taken the style of your magazine in to consideration and this shows. Clear fonts and good cover stories.
Areas of development: a lot of empty spaces and in some places messy i would just tidy it up a bout for example having the barcode along the bottom may look neater? I like the red faded background but i would see if anything else looks better like plane white so its not overly red also her dress is pink why not try it in pink?

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